Editorial Services

Perfect for fiction writers looking for help with their query letter, first page, or first five pages.

What You Can Expect:

In-line notes via track changes in a Google Doc.
Advice ranging from big picture plot ideas to clarifying small details, pacing, character, and worldbuilding, as well as my first impressions as a reader, and possible solutions as a writer.
My critique style is encouraging, honest, and enthusiastic. I'm not trying to change your vision, but to make your vision as clear as possible.

Query Letter Critique

$10

Second Pass: $5

$25

Second Pass: $20

$60

Critique of Query Letter, your first 10 pages, and 1 round of revision included.